Anyone Or Me

[Atomic Louey]

What is it anyway
any of this
what does it mean
to anyone
or to me
Why am I here today
why do I exist
longing to be seen
by anyone
and by me
How can I get past
my past
when I hurt everyone
Is anything worth saving
for anyone
or for me
Will anything last
or surpass
love of one
I am craving
from anyone
or from me

[machinery]

a lot of questions in this work....

to me, it seems like this whatever you feel like and you just wrote down...could be wrong

if that's what it is....to me, it would look be without so much form....down in a straight line...and all that jazz...this would be really good in prose....a simple paragraph....make use of colons and exclamations and these ------oh yeah!

put some side thought into this...in parenthesis.....

this is just what I feel....tell me what you think...